interesting concept the with the way you've decided to show her abilities. I would have to see a bit more lighting in what I can only assume to be electricity because im not familiar with this character. I fell as though adding more light or using a different coloring program would have really made the picture pop.
I a bit saddened because although the focus of the picture is obviously centered on this woman there is no background. I feel as though a nice detailed background or even a simple one corresponding to this characters ability would have increased the impact a bit more. Other than that I don't see very much to complain about unless your a major comic fan boy and want every single detail correct. But other that a very nice addition to the site. I commend you sir
I like that she's facing the top point of the pentagram, which is cool. I actually love the anatomy, except for the breasts. They're just a tad too far apart, and the right one (her left, my right, I guess) doesn't have a very natural slope, I can't describe how it could be fixed, but it looks like she's about to lose a tennis ball from her bustier.
Other than that, I LOVE the foreshortening, the anatomy around the rest of the torso, hips and thighs is impeccable, and the motion of her hands is compelling and graceful. I suck at hands myself, so I'm jealous of anyone who can draw them well, so I'm jealous of you.
The colors are sweet. I almost want there to be more shadow behind her, like she's stepping out of a black hole, but there doesn't need to be much more background than that. She has a nice "glow" here the way you've shown the light direction, but some more shadow would make it pop. I'll quit bellyaching. Go draw us some more, man.
This really looks amazing! I'm loving how the colors are going, especially with the legs, thighs, hair, and hex-spheres. My only concern would be the anatomy. Have you ever heard of Esher Girls? You may want to look at their tumblr for tips. Other than that, this is fantastic!
So Rob, this is bloody amazing. The only thing i can say is maybe up the darks around the rest of the body because the darks in the hair stand out so much, if it was me i'd place a small cast shadow onto the cape, around her crotch area, and red part of the cape.
But still. holy balls man, i just want to sleep between those thighs.
cheers, and believe me coming from an artist like you thats a huge compliment! can't believe you're at the Kubert School!!! Im from the UK and have had always had this starry eyed view of the school after seeing the adverts in comics as a kid! you're very lucky!
Thank you! I definitely am lucky, I've wanted to go here since Jr. High and it still feels like a dream (even when it feels like a nightmare haha) I have learned a lot since coming here so I really can't complain too much